Hello，my name is Lin Min. I live in Chang’an Town. I study in Chang’an No. 1 Primary School in Dongguan City.

I have my own room now. It’s small but nice. I love my room. In my room, there is a trash bin, It is not dirty, it’s clean. Near the trash bin, it’s a shelf, many books are on it. I have a piano in my room, it’s black and white. I can play piano in my bedroom. Oh, what’s on the piano? It’s my photo. Look, I am very happy! I can do housework. I can sweep the floor, empty the trash and clean the bedroom. I can’t cook the meals, but I’d like to have a try. My mother can teach me. I think I am helpful at home. Do you agree with me?.

What can you do? What’s your bedroom like? Can you tell me, please? Nice to meet you. Good bye!

评：从作文中可以看出这名学生很喜欢自己的房间，她一定把自己的房间布置得又漂亮又舒服，而且这个学生也一定非常喜欢做家务，是妈妈的好帮手。整篇作文用词准确、生动。